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Oldsage
07-24-2008, 02:45 PM
I wrote this a little while back, but haven't come up with a name that feels right for it. Any suggestions? And as always, commentary is welcome.

Unnamed
I have died a thousand deaths.
I have lived a thousand lives.
I have marched with Caesar’s legions.
I have sailed all seven seas.

I know the highest mountain peaks
and the hidden valleys of the land.
I have stood astride the stars themselves
and walked the many hells.

I have experienced love both greater and deeper than any mortal heart can bear.
I have stood fast by true friends as they have me.
I’ve known glory and fame, knowledge and wisdom.
I’ve had wealth, power, and prestige such as only the gods know.

But I would trade it all to once more be home.
To hear its sighing winds.
To feel its grass beneath my feet.
To once more be home.

I have died a thousand deaths.
I have lived a thousand lives.
But in the end
I still search.

IK the Troll
07-24-2008, 02:54 PM
I think the line "To hear it's sighing winds" would work. Or perhaps "Exodus". I'll keep thinking upon it.

sableagle
07-24-2008, 04:25 PM
How about Astray?

Lithanial
07-24-2008, 09:51 PM
Exile

Oldsage
07-25-2008, 03:14 PM
Exile

I like that.